Помощ по английски (спешно)

[Luben.]

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Hi Chris,
The weather here has been great since I arrived! I have visited so many places such as Sofia, Bratsigovo and Bourgas. My friends and I had a lot of fun at these places and I have swam in the sea, in Bourgas. I have tried some traditional Bulgarian dishes such as “Banitsa” which was also the one I liked the most. I met all kind of people, even one person tried to stole my phone but he failed. I will just have fun and do whatever I like till the end of my tour.
06.04.2014
With love, Luben.

[Flickercho]

Супер е, само някои пунктуационни грешчици има със запетайките, иначе синтактично е добре, както и лексикално!